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i found a secret place
where i can take out my frustrations
without worrying who will see
every line of the pain i've felt
©2004-2009 ~stickynectar
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The first four lines are good and solid and totally relates to what a lot of people are going through.
"Every line of the pain I've felt".....God, I love that line for some reason...kind of does express your frustration and sadness and anger with the world you know?
When I first looked at this I wished there was more added, but now as I look at this I think these four lines are powerful and expressive enough...
*goes off to check your other works* MUEHEHEHEHHE...

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If you tell the truth you never have to remember anything.

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thanks for commenting. it's much appreciated.

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