i found a secret place
where i can take out my frustrations
without worrying who will see
every line of the pain i've felt
i found a secret place where i can take out my frustrations without worrying who will see every line of the pain i've felt |
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October 26, 2004
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The first four lines are good and solid and totally relates to what a lot of people are going through.
"Every line of the pain I've felt".....God, I love that line for some reason...kind of does express your frustration and sadness and anger with the world you know?
When I first looked at this I wished there was more added, but now as I look at this I think these four lines are powerful and expressive enough...
*goes off to check your other works* MUEHEHEHEHHE...
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